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digitaldivemods) wrote2012-02-05 12:53 am
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CHARACTER APPLICATION
If you want to apply for a character at Digital Dive, simply take one of the forms below and reply to this post.
Applications will now be judged on a rotation cycle. Applications can be submitted throughout the entire month, but they will only be judged, rejected, or sent back for revision in the last two weeks of any calendar month.
New to Digital Dive, you can now use the Dive Tests Network to act in place of the RP Sample or D-Comm Network Post. You can only use it for one, however! Further details for how this works can be found here.
Before you apply, there are a few points we'd like to make known:
If you wish to app a character from a movie, video game, or other work released in individual (read, not regular), we'd like to ask that you wait for 30 days out of consideration for spoilers.
Most applications are judged on a two strikes your out policy, with applicants being given one chance to correct aspects of an app that the moderators feel are lacking or in error. However, if the majority of the application has numerous faults, the moderators reserve the right to reject an app wholesale. In the case of a rejected application, you must wait a full month before applying or reserving for them again, and in that time, the character you have applied for is still considered up for grabs.
Because all situations and canons are different, the moderators reserve the rights to question an application's merit and communicate with the applicant about the matter. This can range from how long the canon has been running, the point in which the character is being applied for, concerns of potential canon-mates, and whatever other necessary situations may arise.
We've provided explanations for each section, so please read over them before you apply!
Name and personal journal: List the name you'd like to be called along with your personal journal, if you have one.
Contact: List the methods by which you can be contacted here, including email, instant messagers, or anything else. We must have some means of getting hold of you outside Dreamwidth itself.
Player's Age: Please list your personal age. We ask presently that players be over the age of 16.
Character/Canon: List the character's name and the canon they originate from. If your character is an original creation, regardless of origin, please indicate this.
Character Type: Is your character a main character, a secondary character, a background character, or an OC?
Tamer Class: Please specify whether you are applying for a Soul Tamer, Matrix Tamer, Spirit Tamer, Xros Tamer, or a Digimon on its own. If you are uncertain of which to select, refer to the respective write-ups on Tamer classes.
Furthermore, if you are applying for a Spirit OR Xros Tamer, we would like you to explain why you believe it would fit your character.
Understand that we can and will, if necessary, deny or ask you change your Tamer Class if it is deemed ill-fitting of the character. This does not count as a strike towards rejection, however, except under circumstances when we determine the Class to be ill-fitting and the applicant doesn't comply.
If you don't understand the Class System well and are uncertain of what to pick, you can either ask a moderator, or simply choose "Soul Tamer" as the default option as it is the easiest to manage. You can always change you Class later!
Character appearance: Post an image of your character's appearance, or post a description if you don't have one.
Character age: List your character's age.
Digimon partner(s)/Spirit/Xros Army: If you are applying for a Soul or Matrix Tamer, please list the digimon you have selected for your partner. This digimon must be at the Child level or lower. You need not determine the rest of its evolution line at this time, and even if you do, you may change it at any time provided you haven't already depicted it as evolving into something else. If your Digimon is a fan creation, please indicate this.
If you are applying for a Spirit Tamer, simply state whether you have chosen the Spirit of Fire, Light, Wind, Ice, Thunder, Steel, Water, Wood, Earth, Darkness, or Corrupted Darkness.
If you are applying for a Xros Tamer, due to the fact that these require more information, we require you to list your army's main partner, their super evolution, and the remaining members of their army.
If you are applying for a character who is a Digimon, feel free to leave this blank. However, if said Digimon is an original creation, please indicate this. We are also not accepting applications for Digimon characters who are the Ultimate/Mega level that do not originate from an existing canon - simply put, you would be allowed to apply for BlackWarGreymon from the Digimon Adventure 02 anime, but not an original character who is a BlackWarGreymon.
In general, if you have trouble coming up with a Digimon Partner, you can feel free to ask the community over AIM, the moderators, or refer to sites such as the Digital Monster Almanac or Wikimon.
Xros Ups: If you are applying for a Xros Tamer, we need to know the Xros Ups your Tamer will be able to form from your Primary Partner, what they're called, and what they can do, including attacks and any other special abilities. Note, that this section is also important for determining you have a grasp of the Digi-Xros concept, so this is where you will show that knowledge. This section is not on the app for non-Xros Tamers.
Character history: Describe your character's history. If you're going to go into great, extensive detail, you won't be denied, but note that we do not need a novel written. Quality comes before quantity, and we simply want to know you understand and grasp the canon you are apping from, as well as give us context so we can better understand the following sections. So, please write it out in a concise, but informative manner.
Note however, that for original characters we will hold this section up to much higher standards. An original character can be rejected based on factors ranging from background quality or just seeming to be a poorly conceived character.
Character personality: Describe your character's personality in an informative, but concise, manner. This is one of the most important aspects of the application, to really show you understand the character and where they might be coming from. The raised standards for original characters also applies here.
Digimon partner personality: Describe your Digimon's personality in an informative, but concise manner. Your Digimon are characters too, and just as important as their Tamer. If you are applying for a Xros Tamer or a Tamer with multiple partners, you must list personality for ALL Digimon. Each one will be held up to the same standards as a single partner. If you are apping a Spirit Tamer, you can skip or remove this section.
Character abilities: Describe your character's abilities. Keep in mind that all offensive powers must be scaled down to the Adult level. Most powers that rely on external sources outside the Digital World generally won't function, though there can be the occasional exception depending on how it's described. Keep in mind this is also an important part of determining whether or not the Tamer Class you have selected for your character is right for them.
Please focus on the character's primary, distinct abilities. If the character has a multitude of attacks or spells, free to link to a wiki or other listing that covers said arsenal of powers, but this cannot substitute for the entire ability write-up.
If your character's abilities exceed that which is deemed fair towards the role play in general, you may be asked to tone them down.
On another note, Dive does consider allowing characters to arrive with piloted mecha. This is subject to certain scrutiny, of course, and is judged in comparison to the character's personal abilities outside of the suit and how much their character revolves around the use of said machine.
Sample RP: Please give us a third person role-play sample, depicting your character and their partner(s) interacting. Both sample sections are very important to show your character's voice, and your ability to write your character from a prose perspective, as this will make up a large potential chunk of your role playing in the Logs community.
Sample D-Comm Network Post: Please give us a role play sample from the perspective of posting from the D-Comm Network. It is, effectively, like posting in an online journal or social networking site. Again, we are trying to get a feel for your character's voice.
This is the app for Soul, Spirit, and Matrix Tamers, as well as standalone digimon characters.
This is the app for Xros Tamers:
Banned Digimon partners:
Keep in mind that some digimon are not allowed as digimon partners or components in an evolution line. These digimon are as follows:
Lucemon (all forms)
Arkadimon (all forms)
Apocalymon
Death-X-mon
Ogudamon
Omegamon
Susanoomon
Chaosmon
UltimateChaosmon
Millenniummon
Moon=Millenniumon
ZeedMillenniumon
Gizmon (all forms)
DarknessBagramon
Quartzmon
In addition, with a few notable exceptions, most "Mode Changes" are not acceptable at this time, and you must select the basic version of those Ultimates. The exceptions are Imperialdramon Dragon Mode and Fighter Mode, both of which can be selected as indvidual Digimon, and Duftmon Leopard Mode, which is a component of Duftmon's abilities.
You may reply to this post with your application.
Applications will now be judged on a rotation cycle. Applications can be submitted throughout the entire month, but they will only be judged, rejected, or sent back for revision in the last two weeks of any calendar month.
New to Digital Dive, you can now use the Dive Tests Network to act in place of the RP Sample or D-Comm Network Post. You can only use it for one, however! Further details for how this works can be found here.
Before you apply, there are a few points we'd like to make known:
We've provided explanations for each section, so please read over them before you apply!
Name and personal journal: List the name you'd like to be called along with your personal journal, if you have one.
Contact: List the methods by which you can be contacted here, including email, instant messagers, or anything else. We must have some means of getting hold of you outside Dreamwidth itself.
Player's Age: Please list your personal age. We ask presently that players be over the age of 16.
Character/Canon: List the character's name and the canon they originate from. If your character is an original creation, regardless of origin, please indicate this.
Character Type: Is your character a main character, a secondary character, a background character, or an OC?
Tamer Class: Please specify whether you are applying for a Soul Tamer, Matrix Tamer, Spirit Tamer, Xros Tamer, or a Digimon on its own. If you are uncertain of which to select, refer to the respective write-ups on Tamer classes.
Furthermore, if you are applying for a Spirit OR Xros Tamer, we would like you to explain why you believe it would fit your character.
Understand that we can and will, if necessary, deny or ask you change your Tamer Class if it is deemed ill-fitting of the character. This does not count as a strike towards rejection, however, except under circumstances when we determine the Class to be ill-fitting and the applicant doesn't comply.
If you don't understand the Class System well and are uncertain of what to pick, you can either ask a moderator, or simply choose "Soul Tamer" as the default option as it is the easiest to manage. You can always change you Class later!
Character appearance: Post an image of your character's appearance, or post a description if you don't have one.
Character age: List your character's age.
Digimon partner(s)/Spirit/Xros Army: If you are applying for a Soul or Matrix Tamer, please list the digimon you have selected for your partner. This digimon must be at the Child level or lower. You need not determine the rest of its evolution line at this time, and even if you do, you may change it at any time provided you haven't already depicted it as evolving into something else. If your Digimon is a fan creation, please indicate this.
If you are applying for a Spirit Tamer, simply state whether you have chosen the Spirit of Fire, Light, Wind, Ice, Thunder, Steel, Water, Wood, Earth, Darkness, or Corrupted Darkness.
If you are applying for a Xros Tamer, due to the fact that these require more information, we require you to list your army's main partner, their super evolution, and the remaining members of their army.
If you are applying for a character who is a Digimon, feel free to leave this blank. However, if said Digimon is an original creation, please indicate this. We are also not accepting applications for Digimon characters who are the Ultimate/Mega level that do not originate from an existing canon - simply put, you would be allowed to apply for BlackWarGreymon from the Digimon Adventure 02 anime, but not an original character who is a BlackWarGreymon.
In general, if you have trouble coming up with a Digimon Partner, you can feel free to ask the community over AIM, the moderators, or refer to sites such as the Digital Monster Almanac or Wikimon.
Xros Ups: If you are applying for a Xros Tamer, we need to know the Xros Ups your Tamer will be able to form from your Primary Partner, what they're called, and what they can do, including attacks and any other special abilities. Note, that this section is also important for determining you have a grasp of the Digi-Xros concept, so this is where you will show that knowledge. This section is not on the app for non-Xros Tamers.
Character history: Describe your character's history. If you're going to go into great, extensive detail, you won't be denied, but note that we do not need a novel written. Quality comes before quantity, and we simply want to know you understand and grasp the canon you are apping from, as well as give us context so we can better understand the following sections. So, please write it out in a concise, but informative manner.
Note however, that for original characters we will hold this section up to much higher standards. An original character can be rejected based on factors ranging from background quality or just seeming to be a poorly conceived character.
Character personality: Describe your character's personality in an informative, but concise, manner. This is one of the most important aspects of the application, to really show you understand the character and where they might be coming from. The raised standards for original characters also applies here.
Digimon partner personality: Describe your Digimon's personality in an informative, but concise manner. Your Digimon are characters too, and just as important as their Tamer. If you are applying for a Xros Tamer or a Tamer with multiple partners, you must list personality for ALL Digimon. Each one will be held up to the same standards as a single partner. If you are apping a Spirit Tamer, you can skip or remove this section.
Character abilities: Describe your character's abilities. Keep in mind that all offensive powers must be scaled down to the Adult level. Most powers that rely on external sources outside the Digital World generally won't function, though there can be the occasional exception depending on how it's described. Keep in mind this is also an important part of determining whether or not the Tamer Class you have selected for your character is right for them.
Please focus on the character's primary, distinct abilities. If the character has a multitude of attacks or spells, free to link to a wiki or other listing that covers said arsenal of powers, but this cannot substitute for the entire ability write-up.
If your character's abilities exceed that which is deemed fair towards the role play in general, you may be asked to tone them down.
On another note, Dive does consider allowing characters to arrive with piloted mecha. This is subject to certain scrutiny, of course, and is judged in comparison to the character's personal abilities outside of the suit and how much their character revolves around the use of said machine.
Sample RP: Please give us a third person role-play sample, depicting your character and their partner(s) interacting. Both sample sections are very important to show your character's voice, and your ability to write your character from a prose perspective, as this will make up a large potential chunk of your role playing in the Logs community.
Sample D-Comm Network Post: Please give us a role play sample from the perspective of posting from the D-Comm Network. It is, effectively, like posting in an online journal or social networking site. Again, we are trying to get a feel for your character's voice.
This is the app for Soul, Spirit, and Matrix Tamers, as well as standalone digimon characters.
This is the app for Xros Tamers:
Banned Digimon partners:
Keep in mind that some digimon are not allowed as digimon partners or components in an evolution line. These digimon are as follows:
Lucemon (all forms)
Arkadimon (all forms)
Apocalymon
Death-X-mon
Ogudamon
Omegamon
Susanoomon
Chaosmon
UltimateChaosmon
Millenniummon
Moon=Millenniumon
ZeedMillenniumon
Gizmon (all forms)
DarknessBagramon
Quartzmon
In addition, with a few notable exceptions, most "Mode Changes" are not acceptable at this time, and you must select the basic version of those Ultimates. The exceptions are Imperialdramon Dragon Mode and Fighter Mode, both of which can be selected as indvidual Digimon, and Duftmon Leopard Mode, which is a component of Duftmon's abilities.
You may reply to this post with your application.
Re: [Ken is not the example of how to be short and concise]
After that fight, representatives of the five teams Basco stole powers from appear to the Gokaigers and grant those powers to them. This allows them to unlock the Greatest Treasure - as it turns out, Navi turns into a gateway for that Treasure with the united teams' ultimate powers. The Greatest Treasure is in fact the "Will of The Earth, a power that can grant any wish... at the cost of all the Super Sentai teams that existed. They will all cease to exist from history, as will their members. As Ackdos Gil prepares his final plan, the Zangyack scientist Insarn is sent on a suicide mission to delay the Gokaigers, and ends up being killed. However, then...
Countless Zangyack ships appear in the sky, all gunning for the pirates. Despite a valiant effort, Gokai-Oh and GoJyuJin are brought down. With the Galleon wrecked and the team scattered, Marvelous limps off... He comes across the kid that had stolen the Shinken Red Key a year before, finding he's become stronger and is trying to fight off the marching Zangyack forces on his own. This shows Marvelous final proof of what the Super Sentai means to the people of Earth. At the wrecked Galleon, the team gives Gai a choice, as its his planet in danger - they can use the Greatest Treasure, and wish all of Zangyack out of existence, or they can fight themselves. Seeing the cost as too high, Gai destroys the Greatest Treasure and they go off to fight the Zangyack forces, proclaiming themselves the 35th Super Sentai.
Still, the Zangyack General Dairando proves too much for them. They're nearly all destroyed by incoming Zangyack ships, when Navi reveals she's hijacked Basco's abandoned ship and uses it to shield them. Marvelous & Gai go off to take the fight to Ackdos, while the others stay to fight, and defeat, Dairando. Marvelous rams Basco's old ship into the Gigant Horse, and he & Gai battle Ackdos himself. While Gai holds the Emperor off, Marvelous turns the Gigant Horse's powerful weapons on the fleet, obliterating anything in the sky. The Gigant Horse is destroyed, but Ackdos lives... so, they continue the fight with the full team. Uniting the full strength of all 35 teams, they're finally able to destroy him.
Months later, with the Galleon repaired, they decide to go after the Second Greatest Treasure in the Universe. Marvelous doesn't know what it is, but figures the Zangyack homeworld is the best place to start. So, as they release the powers of the past 34 teams to their rightful owners, the 35th Super Sentai sails off into the sunset in search of their next treasure.
Re: [Ken is not the example of how to be short and concise]
Often times, he can come across seemingly disinterested or annoyed with something if it isn't a part of his goals. Other times, if it's something he finds exciting, he will follow it through with an enthusiasm that is next to impossible to stop. However, throughout everything, he will often come across people in need or those that need saving...
In the end, he always ends up helping these people. Many times, that disinterest is feigned. He will shrug off any praise for helping people, will not dare call himself a hero, and will laugh or roll his eyes at anyone who does. He is a pirate, and he has a reputation to uphold. But despite how rough around the edges he may be, how much he may not APPEAR to care about the perils of those in danger, he is at his heart a good man. As a good man, he will always find a way to do the right thing in the end... even if he has to make up an excuse to cover his good deed.
Protecting dreams is very important to him, as is protecting his crew. His crew is his family, and those he cares the most about. Anything that puts them in danger will be faced with a gun and/or sword to the face. He will do ANYTHING to protect the other Gokaigers, no matter how much danger it puts his own health in. It is not just his crew's dreams that are important, though - upon realizing his own view of what it means to be a leader and a Captain, he has come to realize the importance of protecting the dreams of those who can't otherwise do it for himself. He will, of course, do this in a pirate fashion... but as it is said above, he will usually find a way to do the right thing in that regard.
So while he may come across to others as uncouth or uncaring, or even a sarcastic or greedy asshole, he does care quite a bit. Far more than one would think upon first impression. He is a pirate first, but in the end, he is also the leader of a Super Sentai. Both of these are now badges he wears with the utmost honor.
Digimon partner personality: Machalcon is, to put things mildly, eccentric. In his previous form, before he was tamed by the Gokaigers, he ran wildly and free across the Engine World, breaking every traffic law in sight as he sought to just race as far and as fast as he could. He even dismissed the words of his parents, Speedor and BeaRV. Cocky and rowdy, even after he mellowed a bit, he was still always concerned about hitting things at full speed with his engines always revved and ready to go at a moment's notice.
Now, however, he's been stuck in the body of a Digimon. He has no wheels, he lacks the speed he once had, and actually is actually a lot more vulnerable than he's used to ever having been, in spite of his new found ability to evolve. This frustrates him terribly, something he tries to hide from Marvelous... and does so very poorly, and is likely to get him several swift kicks in the ass. Now that he is NOT a giant robot race car, though, his mouth is liable to get him in a lot of trouble. He has quite the habit of shooting it off, quickly and often.
He is completely loyal to Marvelous and all the Gokaigers. He pretty much thinks himself a Gokaiger anyway, so he's just as protective of them as Marvelous might be. They were people who accepted him for what he is, and that is something he is not liable to forget anytime soon.
Character abilities: Marvelous is skilled with numerous weapons and fighting styles, but his largest skill lies in a keen swordsmanship and pinpoint marksmanship. He is no slouch in hand to hand combat, either.
Even untransformed, Marvelous can summon up and wield his Gokai Gun and Gokai Saber. The Gokai Gun has seemingly infinite ammo, firing small round bullets, but only tends to provide minimal damage against armored opponents. The Gokai Saber is an extremely strong blade, meanwhile. It is theoretically possible to utilize his "Final Wave" attacks detailed below untransformed, but it would likely end up hurting him in some manner or another, so it's not generally ADVISED.
Using the red Gokaiger Ranger Key in conjunction with his Mobirates transformation device, he can transform into Gokai Red, leader of the Pirate Sentai.
As Gokai Red, Marvelous' strength, resistance, and leaping ability is greatly increased. He can withstand a number of attacks to his person he wouldn't be able to otherwise, including slashes from a blade. Despite being skin tight, his suit acts as armor. He can, and has, been injured, cut, and shot through the suit but it takes a particularly strong hit to penetrate it. Even if the suit isn't penetrated, he'll still be hurt from directly blows suffered. He is, after all, still human... even if it's a Space Human.
Inserting a Ranger Key into either the Gokai Gun or Gokai Saber, he can summon a "Final Wave" finishing attack. For the Saber, this is either a powerful energy blade launched from the sword, or the energy can be contained within the Saber to attack physically with increased power. The Gun's Final Wave is a powerful, energized shot.
On his own, he can only preform one Final Wave at a time. Any other Ranger Key can be inserted into both weapons at the same time, though, allowing him to use both the Slash and Blast Final Waves at the same time. Since the previous 34 teams' powers were returned, this would require using a teammate's Key for the second weapon. Likewise, all main five Gokaiger weapons are interchangeable - Marvelous can use any of the other main five's Saber or Gun, and vice versa. Though Marvelous fights primarily with the Gun & Saber most of the time, this is a technique the others use to compliment their varied styles.
Any Gokaiger can summon the Gokai Galleon Buster, a large bazooka which fires powered shots of energy. Utilized on its own, it just shoots standard shots. If five Gokaigers all insert their Ranger Keys into it, though, it preforms a "Charged" attack of the main color Key used in it's primary ignition slot and attacks with the combined power of all five Keys. For instance, if Gokai Red is the one whose Key is the main one used, it preforms a "Red Charge." For Pink, it'd be a "Pink Charge" and so forth. Either way, the result is the same - it shoots a large energy blast of their combined power, in the shape of the Gokai Galleon. (Though not nearly close to its SIZE.)
However, it will require five Gokaigers present to ever use that attack - without that, all it can be used for is a bigger gun, just without the significantly bigger boom.
Special Note/Request #1: The Gokai Galleon.
With permission, I'd like to request that Marvelous enters the Digital World with the Gokai Galleon in tow.
The Gokai Galleon is a large pirate ship... with wings. And rocket boosters. It's an airship, and though capable of interstellar travel in canon, Yggdrasil's machinations will prevent it from breaching the Digtial World's atmosphere.
The Galleon is built more like a battleship than any old pirate vessel, as it's hull is made of a strong metal. This is because in the Super Sentai world, the Gokai Galleon is the housing for four other machines, and when all five unite together, they form a giant robot named Gokai-Oh. Naturally... this will not be allowed to happen in this world. I will leave it to the mods discretion of what happens to the other Machines - they technically belong to the other Gokaigers, but it's obvious we'd not be able to get any of those other machines active. So whether they're just deactivated or simply banned from the world, I will leave to the non-Gokaiger apping moderators.
Regardless, the Galleon isn't a super robot by itself, and for the most part is just a ship. That flies. It has some moderate forms of defense beyond its heavy armoring - including port side cannons and guns mounted onto its wings. The front of the ship is also home to a massive sword, which I'd doubt an enemy would like plowing into their own vessel.
The Gokai Galleon, technically being Gokai Red's machine, is primarily controlled by him. It has an autopilot, but for more precise controls in battle Gokai Red must be at the helm. And though it can function without him, it's regardless still tied to his Ranger Key - if power to the ship is lost for any reason or another, or if it has a crash landing, it's not going to start back up unless he plugs his Key in. The Galleon also has navigation systems that can map the world they're on, and computer systems that can tap into a world's general information network.
Inside, as well, are quarters for the team, a kitchen, a work lab, and a large general living area. If the Gokai Machines are removed from inside it entirely, there will also be a significant amount of extra storage space within the ship.
Primarily, I'm asking permission for the Galleon because a group of pirates need a ship to be rightful pirates, or else Marvelous is going to waste little time trying to commandeer other vessels anyway.
Special note/Request #2: With the Galleon, I'd also like to request Navi, Marvelous' robot parrot sidekick, enter the Digital World with him. Navi has no real combat abilities, and without a Doc/Gokai Green, she's the only one in the crew otherwise that would have any idea of how to deal with the more intricate computer systems. She is also very tightly connected to Marvelous personally, as she is one of the last remaining things from Marvelous' mentor, AkaRed. It is effectively much the same as a Pokemon Trainer coming in with one of their Pokemon.
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Machalcon hadn't been opposed to this thought. The concept of needing food was new to him, and he didn't like the feeling of being hungry. This also led to him putting away WAY too much food, and by the time they'd raided the pantry a couple of times for anything prepared Doc and Gai had ready before the Galleon was sucked into this world... Well, they were out of food. Out of food that didn't need to be COOKED, anyway, and no one present knew much how to do that.
So they found this place. Burgermon Village. Lots of great food there, apparently. Seemed simple enough. They found a bar, got waited on... but while they were waiting on their food, a burly looking Tamer had made some snide remark in Marvelous' direction.
Machalcon honestly couldn't remember who threw the first punch. It had probably been Marvelous. Either way, it was only seconds before the entire bar was embroiled in conflict. Chairs were thrown, bottles were broken, people and Digimon alike were kicked in the junk. Again, probably by Marvelous.
The Falcomon had joined in the brawl with as much enthusiasm as his partner, the adrenaline temporarily covering for the fact he was hungry as hell. He was still unused to this body, though, and... well, quickly found himself throw under a table where he laid for several moments.
By the time the waiter came from the kitchen with their ordered, about half of the patrons were on the floor. Several more had been tossed through a window. Machalcon sat up with his head spinning to see Marvelous still squaring off against the burly Tamer who had first insulted him. The large man rushed the pirate, throwing a punch. Marvelous caught the man's arm and countered, using his own momentum to flip him... sending him over the bar to land on the ground with a heavy thud.
"Y- yeah...!" Machalcon stammered, holding a wing to his head as he stood up unsteadily. "That's what you get!"
Marvelous spun on one foot to face the waiter, dusting off his jacket as he did so. Everyone else was either fleeing the scene, now, or just trying to get back to a stable seat that hadn't been broken over someone's head. The pirate captain flashed the waiter a grin, holding a hand up in a two fingered salute.
"Yeah, can we get that to go?"
Sample D-Comm Network Post:
[Normal text = Marvelous, Bold text = Machalcon, Italics text = Navi.]
[an audio message starts up, and anyone listening is met with a VERY LOUD VOICE]
ATTENTION DIGITAL WORLD.
MY NAME IS CAPTAIN MARVELOUS, CAPTAIN OF THE GOKAI GALLEON, AND LEADER OF THE PIRATE SENTAI GOKAIGER.
WE ARE HERE IN SEARCH OF YOUR TREASURE. PLEASE, FEEL FREE TO OFFER UP VALUABLES, MONEY, AND THE LOCATIONS OF ANCIENT HIDDEN ARTIFACTS AT YOUR LEISURE. IT WILL SAVE BOTH YOU AND US TIME IN THE FUTURE.
Marvelous, that didn't work the first time, what makes you think it'll work THIS time?! And without the others to back you up, even!
Shut up, Bird!
She's right, man! GEEZ, do you have to hold that damn Megaphone to your D-Comm, INSIDE THE SHIP?! I think my head's gonna be ringing for a week!
...I am surrounded by poultry.
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In addition, please tell us the journal name for your character and make a IC contact page in it as well.